Monday, 29 February 2016

Narrative Writing, Crocodile Story.

Narrative Writing
WALT: write a narrative story that has an introduction, problem and resolution
Man, Crocodile, Bull Shark,
(where & when)
River, New Zealand, Auckland,

What went wrong?
The Crocodile tips the boat over.

How is the problem is fixed?
The piha helicopter saves the man, the zookeeper takes the crocodile to the zoo.

Introduction - Characters & setting. (Who? where? when?)
Tim, Crocodile, Bull Shark,
Rangitoto, NZ,
Sunday Afternoon,

Problem - What went wrong?

Sunday Afternoon, there was a man name tim. Here was fishing in his boat, he was waiting waiting for a fish so he could feed his cat. 1 hour later, There was 2 big sea animals, It was hooked on the rod then tim was pulling and pulling, later on, it was a Bull Shark and a Crocodile!. Tim was so scared because he was not strong and brave, he was crying like a girl, Screaming like a girl, Acting like a girl and crying like a baby. Then the Crocodile and the Bull Shark eaten tim’s bum.

Resolution - How was the problem fixed? It can be sad or happy.
The Zookeeper can take the Crocodile and the Bull Shark back to the zoo

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Narrative Writng.

Narrative Writing
WALT: understand the features of narrative writing.

Character (who)
My Name is Craig.
Setting (where)
Problem (plot)
Something is missing and it was a tent.
Resolution (how problem is fixed)
Mum and Dad find it in the forest.

Introduction - Characters & setting. (Who? when? where?)

2 years ago. There was a boy name Craig. Early in the morning, they were cooking marshmallows and hot dogs. Then they went to have a swim at the beach.

After their swim at the beach, the tent was gone! Mum and Dad had to go and find before sunset. It was deep deep deep in the forest, after they found it.

But it was stolen by a thief. Later

Problem - What went wrong?

After they finished their swim at the beach. The tent was gone!

Resolution - How was the problem fixed? Can be sad or happy.

Mum and Dad go and find the tent but It was deep in the forest. After they found it but it was stolen. Later bring it back in the night.

Monday, 8 February 2016

Aloha my name is Nytram and I am from Pt England School and I am a Year 5 student. My teachers for 2016 are Mr Baxendine and Mr Goodwin. My family is from New Zealand and Tonga. And my other family is from Samoa. We go travel around the country and we always want to go to Mt Smart Stadium to see the Vodafone Warriors and at ANZ Stadium to watch the grand final in Sydney. I do stuff like 3D printing and Coding. My favourite sport is Rugby league, Rugby union and American baseball. Enjoy reading my blog, I hope you leave a comment.