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Thursday, 10 March 2016

Narrative Writing - Detail Problem.

Narrative Writing - Detailed Problem
WALT: write a detailed narrative story problem.
THE THREE LITTLE PIGS
PLAN:

Problem
What went wrong?

What are some extra details you could add?






Introduction:
Many years ago there lived a old mother pig and three little pigs. They lived in a little grassy clearing in the middle of a dark forest. The three little pigs grew so big that their mother said to them, "You are too big to live here any longer. You must go and build houses for yourselves but be very careful that the big bad wolf does not eat you.”

Problem:
The first little pig made his house of straws and lived on a mountain. The second little pig made his house of sticks and lived in a cave. The third little pig went to get materials. 2 hours later the third little pig came back to build his house with bricks. It took longer to build it and it was smooth and flatter.
Then the big bad wolf came to the first little pig house made of straw. The big bad wolf said, “little pig little pig please come out, if you don’t then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down.” The first little pig went running and running to the second house, but the big bad wolf chased him.

“The first little pig went to see his brother at the second little pig house made with sticks,’’ the big bad wolf came back, “he said little pigs little pigs please come out, if you don’t then I’ll huff then I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down.’’ The two little pigs went to run away to the third little pig’s house made out of bricks. The three little pigs were safe, then the the big bad wolf came to the third little pig’s house made out of bricks.

“He said little pig little pig please come down, if  you don’t then I’ll huff then I’ll puff then I’ll blow your house down. He tried and tried then he couldn’t blow it down, “then he tried kicking it but his feet got sore.” There was one way the went down the chimney, then the hot water blow his bum away. The End.’’

Monday, 7 March 2016

Gopher Story


On a super windy Monday morning in the middle of a farm in New York City there was a dusty road. There was a big chubby gopher name Dummy. There was a sign which had tomato's and other vegetables around the place.

Friday, 4 March 2016

About Me

Aloha my name is Nytram and I am from pt england school and I am a Year 5 and my teachers for 2016 is Mr Baxendine and Mr Goodwin. My family is from New Zealand and Tonga. And my other family is from Samoa. We go travel around the country and we always want to go to Mt Smart Stadium to see the Vodafone Warriors and at ANZ Stadium to watch the grand final in Sydney.

I do stuff like 3D printing and Coding. My favourite sport is Rugby league, Rugby union and American baseball. Enjoy reading my blog, I hope you leave a comment.

Auckland Volcanos




                                        WE ARE LEARNING ABOUT VOLCANOS!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Mt Eden Volocano

https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1KKUXzRrfxGP6ViJ4nL3yb5JzspcefAh--ASb03arQKc/pub?w=960&h=720